The Forbidden Soul

by The Fallen Angel   Aug 7, 2016


I am the forbidden soul,
hidden by the shadows,
of darkness in disguise,
forbidden from the life.
I burned down all the bridges,
and raised the walls up high.
I made them stronger,
so it never fell apart.
I bled my heart whole,
and the poison poured.
I gave into the darkness,
so I could never be found.
I turned myself ice-cold,
Desiccated my emotions,
and became empty inside,
to find a whole new me,
A new me, no one wishes to,
recognise or remember!

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  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    I love how this is full of dark imagery yet that ray of Hope of finding oneself.
    Only thing is I think wish should be wishes.

    Em

    • 7 years ago

      by The Fallen Angel

      Thank you Em!! Thanks for pointing out the correction and it's done!! (Y) :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    I agree with Michael, ending things but breathing life into something new. Lots of dark imagery but hope too-

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    I love the term 'bled my heart whole' to me it suggests an instant death. The old poisoned blood gAve way for new life. Old emotions crumbled leaving a blank new sheet to start again.

    This poem is full of dark imagery and yet is breathing hope of new beginnings.

    Well done and take care,

    Michael

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