Comments : I Can

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello Gelyn,

    The words: Stand, recharge, believe, empower, learn and I can are words that are worth mentioning. These words follow a knockdown of some description.

    First off, stand up, recharge, brush yourself down and take stock, believe that you can make a difference and do things differently, empower yourself with what you need to succeed, learn what you need and finally know you can achieve anything you put your mind to.

    Well done - words of wisdom indeed.

    Take care,

    Michael

    • 1 year ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Thank you so much sir. for the compliment
      and also i take that as advice..thanks for dropping by

  • 1 year ago

    by Hallucinostic

    It's been a while since I've read something here. I'm glad I chose this one. I think you did really good in expressing what you wanna say here. Pointing out the words in the end gives extra power in what you're saying. A real good poem here.

  • 1 year ago

    by stormingdance (Jessica)

    A truly inspiring piece. When the world tries to judge you or kick you while you're down, always trust in your inner power.

    Thanks for sharing! 5/5!

    • 11 months ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hi Amariah,
      Sorry if my eye skipped your comment. I just want to thank you for the nice words..

      Gel

  • 1 year ago

    by Augustus Black

    It's a very inspirational poem. Ate Gel. This kind of poem lift up the broken sad heart. Very well written and I know you will definitely succeed in your object.

    Well done.

    • 1 year ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Thanks Lil Bro. ..I know and I can feel that I will succeed in everyway..hahaha power of mind works

  • 11 months ago

    by Em

    Gel, what a great thought provoking, inspirational piece as always.

    I have failed a hundred times of my career
    But I will never stop, never tired to stand still.
    "Stand"
    ^^
    Yes, we may all fail many times but aslong as we stand tall and learn from our failures then we have done a good job.

    I have succeeded then fail again
    Sometimes my energy drains.
    "Recharge"
    ^^
    Failing multiple times will drain us of everything energy, life and even love but when recharged we will show willing and have faith in ourselves, thats all that matters.

    The people you thought will support you
    Sometimes the ones that will thug you.
    "Believe"
    ^^
    Yes, the one's who love us can sometimes hurt is the most and we have to believe in ourselves before anyone else will.

    Other will assume that you are weak
    Will discourage you, every time and every bit.
    "Empower"
    ^^
    Nods frantically, so true. Power gets to peoples heads sometimes.

    Attend training that can give you earnings
    Avoid persons that will keep you ruined...
    "Learn"
    ^^
    In life and love we will learn always.

    Fantastic words of advice.
    Em

    • 11 months ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Thanks Em. I like the way you praise this. ...And you make me read this again. ..I really need this today. ...

      Thanks again

  • 11 months ago

    by Em

    The pleasure's all mine :)

  • 11 months ago

    by Marvellous

    Life is Lessons In Failed Events. When understood, it turns out Fair. We struggle less, when Truth, we've learned. A winner never learns to quit.