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by stormingdance (Jessica) Aug 16, 2016
Nature, environment /
Wearily little sparks of life flutter
Into the great abyss - chasing away
Grasp on our dreams
Shattering fear.~I self-publish my poetry. Wings is published within the book Introspection + Equilibrium on Amazon ~ http://amzn.to/2bzFNA7
What a beautiful done acrostic. The imagery is wonderful and it's such a pleasure to read time,and again.
by Ramon G Haupt
I like this, very good reminds me so much of nature which we tend not to take care of
I really liked this a lot. You have put so much into one neat package. Well done-
by - Mr. Darcy
Nicely executed acrostic. To me it was like a hundred tiny moths or fireflis being disturbed into the night air; offering luminous relief from the darkness.
by Ben Pickard
I have always been an advocate of the humble acrostic, simply because it is a much underused form. When done properly, they can be an absolute pleasure to read; this is one of those.