Comments : Five minutes to help you smile

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Em - thank you. This is the most beautiful, heart-wrenching piece of poetry that anyone has ever scrawled with such a majestic and magical quill - and all for me!
    It certainly did cheer me up.... (sorry)

    In seriousness, a lovely little poem that would cheer anyone!

    SL

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Haha Sir L I didn't think you'd notice it was all for you ;)

      Love these cheeky comments, they always make my day. Thank you

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Beautiful em. Ive saved to read another day

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Thank you N

  • 1 year ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    A beautiful piece, one that makes me wish that we could make you smile through all your hurt. I love the honesty in this piece as well, particularly the "you may be a little crazy" line. So on the spot! Is it possible to write poetry and not be crazy?

    Regardless, I loved it. The only correction I'd suggest is the last line "its" should be "It's".

    Much love,
    5/5
    IdTakeABulletForYou

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Thank you S for your comment as always.

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Em, such a lovely write! I like that even as you go through your own struggles you still are making sure someone else you care for is getting a smile and some love from you. Having someone in your life a little crazy is a good thing, makes things interesting.

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Thanks Brenda. Others I care about always come first so if their smiling I am happy. Xx

  • 6 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is a very sweet message which sums up what this
    person means to you and how it has changed your ways..
    your outlooks...keep penning :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    It's no surprise that I like this really is it? Total suckered for short and sweet write and I really like this, totally open hearted and honest as all good love poems should be.

    Ben

    • 6 months ago

      by Em

      Thank you Meena and Ben, always appreciated