Comments : As the Sun Rises Higher

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Wow, wow and wow some more.

    This is an excellent, dark piece with so much emotion that it came and bit me on the bum lol.
    Amazing imagery too.
    Em

    • 7 years ago

      by Kakera

      Ahaha, love your expressions! My poem is so dark and emotional that it through esoteric rituals spawned an arcane demon that magically bit you bum somehow!

      Thank you for reading and commenting, it's much appreciated <3

  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    It bit my bum also! :-)

    • 7 years ago

      by Kakera

      Hahaha, I will have to spank this poem later for being so naughty!

  • 7 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I love poems on the dark side and I felt the emotion. Excellent written.

    • 7 years ago

      by Kakera

      Thank you for taking the time to both read and comment. :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Kakera,

    well done on this darkest of writes. It drips the frustration of a world where the few try to ruin it for the many.

    Well done on your win.

    Take care,

    Michael

    • 7 years ago

      by Kakera

      Thank you. You nailed the interpretation too, with only one minor mistake - the frustration stems from them succeeding, not just trying. And at the same time, I keep asking myself, asking others: what is my place in all of this chaos?

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    I'm so glad this is on the front page especially as it bit me so violently on the buttocks haha

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is hauntingly beautiful.