Comments : Who am I?

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Hi ken, this is a uniquely written piece as I've never read one quite like it. Your rhyming makes it much smoother to read.
    I think we all often ask ourselves this questions many times in our lives and never quite know the answer.

    All the best and thanks for the laugh,
    Em

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Dear Ken, you have a way of putting a smile on my face. Thanks for sharing this one, I often ask myself the same question. Still waiting for the answer. Hope you are well, take care.

    • 4 months ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Makes me feel good to make you smile Dag.

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    Each day that passes we can't seem to get through them without having any thoughts. We question ourselves and at the same time situation questions us.

    I like the rhyme scheme you have used in this and it flowed really well without a hitch...enjoyed it!

  • 1 year ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Thanks, EM, Dag and Meena, like Ben I like to write a rhyming puzzle with a surprise answer at the end. We are doing well and thanks for your concern.

    Your friend Ken

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Ken

    I have missed reading your poetry - it is unique and has a clear voice which is all we poets can really ask for. There is also an inherent humour in all your work which I love.

    SL

    • 1 year ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks SL, I am posting a new one called; A Poet's inquiry.

    • 4 months ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Many thanks Ben.

  • 1 year ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Great poem, nice rhyme and rhythm. I like the way you explained yourself, your personality through your relationship with another, what you are to them. Although you question your relationship, your personality is clear.

    BTW, you have a grammar mistake, first stanza, second line... it's "you're" not "your" (Why am I angry and you're** filled with glee?)

    Keep it up!

    • 4 months ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Teacher and friend, Zahra.