The first time we kissed

by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist   Aug 19, 2016

(A poem dedicated to my husband)

I still remember the awkward moment when we first kissed

That look that froze me and rooted me on that seat.

Then the next moment was the most thrilling moment of my life ever,

I couldn't find the way to stop you when you held my face closer.

Our lips finally met, nausea, diplopia or dizziness? Crazy feeling that I didn't know,

Then I found myself in the darkness, responding to every move of your lips, though.

All of the sudden, I forgot everything and even my name. clearly, it's dementia,

I hope that it's not a total memory loss or should I say amnesia.

My blood pumped up into my brain that made my facial color change,

My heart began to dance and felt like it's about to popped out of my mouth.

My lungs filled with air that I didn't even know where it from,

But I'm still breathless needing the air but needing you more.

And suddenly the earth stopped moving,I can't see,because it's all blurred,

My whole body shook, then next thing I've noticed was a "tsup" sound.

Breaking all the silence and taking away my paralysis,

Then our lips were apart, felt like a thousand needle poking these.

I can move then, but I couldn't look you back, my eyes still covered with sparks,

Tried to hide it by looking outside the half-opened window of the passenger seat.

Then you held my hand, it's warm and you were shaking too. This is it,

I couldn't help myself staring back at you, your eyes shine,you are fascinating,

Finally, your mouth opened and you were about to deliver something,

You moved your face close to my ear and uttered the words that I wanted to hear,

"I love you and you don't need to answer back, just hug me and that's enough".

Author's note:

All of my compositions are labor of love, hurt, and pain..
Originally made from my own Experiences.
A copyright not a copycat.



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  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    Lovely dedication.

    All the best, Em

  • 2 years ago


    Great work gelyn! 5/5 Gave my excellent but
    my six shooter voter ran out of ammo.


    • 2 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist


      Thank you Ken for appreciating my piece and for voting it as well..

      keep an reading,keep on writing and keep on inspiring.


  • 2 years ago

    by Ashton

    That is the best poam I see today.

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A lovely poem and a lovely dedication.


  • 2 years ago

    by STEVE

    This is such a sweet poem full of meaning and love