Naomi, this is lovely. A beautiful dedication to your 'fur loves.'
into your ear as I cry.
You sit and listen.
This is a lovely opening but sad that you are sad. Our true friends will definitely sot and listen through our happiness and sadness.
Cuddling close to me
hanging on every word said.
Looking with sad eyes.
I like this part as there seems to be a twist as in why would a friend cuddle close and hang onto your every word but then it dawned on me, maybe its a friend with benefits (that was my original thought.)
I love you so much.
Always there when I need you!
Fur-ever my pets.
I then read the ending and what a true twist and beautiful ending, one which pet owners can relate too. I do not have any pets but my mums dogs always listen when I'm sad lol.
So we have got another Aussie.
Very well written in respect of the pets. People those have pets do such stuffs. You have described the pain in a very realistic way.
Short but very effective. Well done.