Sky (Acrostic + Haiku)

by stormingdance (Jessica)   Sep 9, 2016


Sun rays climbing up
Kissing the clouds and healing
Yesterday's heartbreak

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  • 2 months ago

    by Lucifer

    It says so much in just 3 lines. Healing yesterday's heartbreak gives it an optimistic ending. Like what happened, we should forget and move on because today is the new beginning.

  • 10 months ago

    by Everywoman

    So short yet so powerful. So unique yet so universal. Just amazing. Hats off to ya :)

  • 11 months ago

    by BlueJay

    Judging Comment:

    For being haiku, this piece carries more than a few meanings within it's amazing imagery. I love that the formatting looks like a cloud as well, which is a cool touch considering it's meant to be about the sky - at least on the surface. The imagery here is extremely vivid and the use of voice is amazingly well incorporated. Lovely write.

  • 1 year ago

    by Trish

    I love this format, and the beauty in the words

  • 1 year ago

    by Trish

    I love this format, and the beauty in the words

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