Brilliant! Truly! I never would have thought of mixing the two forms and you have done so to really great effect.
Nothing has been lost or forced because of the limitations that the acrostic side of it may have applied and the piece as a whole is inspirational.
I will nominate this on Monday when my votes are back and I won't forget.
For being haiku, this piece carries more than a few meanings within it's amazing imagery. I love that the formatting looks like a cloud as well, which is a cool touch considering it's meant to be about the sky - at least on the surface. The imagery here is extremely vivid and the use of voice is amazingly well incorporated. Lovely write.
1 year ago
So short yet so powerful. So unique yet so universal. Just amazing. Hats off to ya :)
11 months ago
It says so much in just 3 lines. Healing yesterday's heartbreak gives it an optimistic ending. Like what happened, we should forget and move on because today is the new beginning.