There is a lot more then what is penned in this poem. There is a longing, a sadness a long ago togetherness time which seems to be not there anymore...only memories which the writer yearns for.
I like the descriptions and the imagery here...touching write, hope you are okay...take care.
1 year ago
by Ben Pickard
This wistful piece reminds me of a film I watched called 'Before Sunrise' about a couple of star-crossed lovers who meet on their travels and their lives are entwined from there on. There are two more wonderful films that follow too, but I'm getting off-point now!
If I have a suggestion, it may be to change '3' to 'three' but that's personal taste and is up to you entirely.