Comments : Infidelity Sucks

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Gel,

    There really is some excellent dark imagery throughout this piece and your anger positively seethes through it.

    Great write,

    Ben

    • 1 year ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hahahaha
      yes, Ben, I transformed here from beauty to beast lol...the feeling that I wanted to kill someone if it is not a sin... God forgive me for what I just said.

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    I agree with Ben.

    Fabulous, dark imagery with your anger shining throughout.

    Our table was ruined, no one, no one wants to eat,
    Because the dish is a curse by thorns of loneliness.
    ^^
    Love this part.

    Em

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Well written poem about infidelity and it's fall out. I really liked your descriptives on the pain and hurt and loneliness that you feel when someone betrays your trust. Well done-

    • 1 year ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Thanks Brenda for the beautiful feedback. ..and I'm really glad that you like it. . have a blessed day and happy writing

      Gel

  • 1 year ago

    by Augustus Black

    Very nice love write as it holds both sadness as well as aggression. I like the most of your description of pain. It's an amazing love write. All the best. Keep on writing.

  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Thank you so much for reading

  • 5 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Close to home...but I don't want him dead. Haha!