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by Ben Pickard
There really is some excellent dark imagery throughout this piece and your anger positively seethes through it.
by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist
yes, Ben, I transformed here from beauty to beast lol...the feeling that I wanted to kill someone if it is not a sin... God forgive me for what I just said.
I agree with Ben.
Fabulous, dark imagery with your anger shining throughout.
Our table was ruined, no one, no one wants to eat,
Because the dish is a curse by thorns of loneliness.
Love this part.
Thank you Em.. I'm glad you guys liked it
Well written poem about infidelity and it's fall out. I really liked your descriptives on the pain and hurt and loneliness that you feel when someone betrays your trust. Well done-
Thanks Brenda for the beautiful feedback. ..and I'm really glad that you like it. . have a blessed day and happy writing
by Augustus Black
Very nice love write as it holds both sadness as well as aggression. I like the most of your description of pain. It's an amazing love write. All the best. Keep on writing.
Thank you so much for reading
Close to home...but I don't want him dead. Haha!