Comments : Delusions of a hopeless romantic

  • 7 years ago

    by ether

    The style of this is intriguing. Recycling the final word in each line to recreate a new sentence that flows on so well must be quite challenging, and you've pulled it off here. I love the content of the piece, too. Well written and original. 5/5

    • 7 years ago

      by Victor

      Thank you so much, I've only just started writing poetry as a regular hobby so your kind words are very much appreciated!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Hello victor and welcome to P&Qs

    I have to agree completely with Ether as this is original and must be hard work recycling the words to recreate a brand new line that flows on so well but you mastered it.

    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Nice loop poetry form. Nice voice and story.