I may be wrong but the first time I read this piece I felt the warmness of the sensuality hidden behind metaphors and certain unusual body parts. It has less words but is very descriptive of the flow of discovering your lover, and wanting to explore. Making sense out of everything about it and realising that you don't have to, but to savor the moment.
I maybe wrong, but that's how I see it. Great write from you sir. Salute!
This write captures the audience from the first line, it is catchy, eloquent, and extremely well presented. The audience can imagine and see everything about this piece clearly, but they can also form their own spin or interpretation of each and every stanza. The style of this is very typical for Senyru, but it never fails to intrigue the audience and is filled with incredible uses of vocabulary. This is the kind of writing many aspire to, and as such, it deserves an honorable mention at the very least.
Mark knows how to metaphorically swoon the reader within his poetry and within this poem selected!
Each stanza is filled with such visuals, its breathtaking! However the reader can manage to understand the meaning without getting lost in the metaphor and I admire and love that! This poem is beautiful!