Comments : 09/27/2016

  • 1 year ago

    by hiraeth

    Quick write, inspired by 'how to calm the sea' by silvershoes,
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1252647

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    A fabulous piece to be inspired by and a wonderful, unique piece you have written here. As always, you have a real way with words and perfectly penned.

    Em

  • 1 year ago

    by silvershoes

    You know the sensation of shivers running down your spine when you witness something beautiful or moving? Yeah. This gave me emotional chills. Thanks, Mark.

  • 1 year ago

    by BlueJay

    This is lovely, and you definitely did an awesome job putting your own spin on your inspiration.

    Gorgeous write, I'm so glad to see you're posting a bit more often!

  • 1 year ago

    by ether

    Whoever down-voted this and didn't leave a comment - SHOW YOURSELF, YOU COWARD.

    I love this, like everything else you post here. A+

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Congratulations on a well deserved win

  • 1 year ago

    by saggi

    Amazing.simple yet elegant.

  • 1 year ago

    by Trish

    A truly unique poem, with body and spirit..

  • 1 year ago

    by Shane

    I may be wrong but the first time I read this piece I felt the warmness of the sensuality hidden behind metaphors and certain unusual body parts. It has less words but is very descriptive of the flow of discovering your lover, and wanting to explore. Making sense out of everything about it and realising that you don't have to, but to savor the moment.

    I maybe wrong, but that's how I see it. Great write from you sir. Salute!

    xxx

  • 11 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Wow nicely penned .. I like the way you use the anatomy, nature and love combined altogether..

    Genius

    Gel

  • 11 months ago

    by BlueJay

    Judging Comment:

    This write captures the audience from the first line, it is catchy, eloquent, and extremely well presented. The audience can imagine and see everything about this piece clearly, but they can also form their own spin or interpretation of each and every stanza. The style of this is very typical for Senyru, but it never fails to intrigue the audience and is filled with incredible uses of vocabulary. This is the kind of writing many aspire to, and as such, it deserves an honorable mention at the very least.

    P.S. CONGRATS ON THE WIN!!!!!!

  • 11 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    Mark knows how to metaphorically swoon the reader within his poetry and within this poem selected!

    Each stanza is filled with such visuals, its breathtaking! However the reader can manage to understand the meaning without getting lost in the metaphor and I admire and love that! This poem is beautiful!