Comments : For Trish #3

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I can quote the whole poem because each line, each word is filled with an in depth loyalty, faithful love for someone who seems to be far from your view.

    The images make this poem come out alive and grab my interest. It yearns as it reaches out for something which seems to elude from your grasp. A touching write...so beautifully sad..take care.

    • 7 years ago

      by Koan

      Dear Meena! Thank you so much for your reply, it means much to me!!! This poem is made out of some of the texts I sent to my baby... What I was trying to say here is that I always knew that my soulmate is out there somewhere and I was drawn to her even without knowing her...
      I also like to take the opportunity to thank Darcy for his help with this poem.. Thank you bro!!!!

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    This is just so lovely, Awwwww love, such a beautiful thing. You have put so much into your words. Loved it!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This is perfect.

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Koan,

    "I hunted you" refrain demonstrates well how desperately love is longed for.

    I really like the clear layout and description - it is as deep as the depicted desire.

    Well done,

    Michael

  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    Koan knows how to write his heart on a cloud, during a thunderstorm! That's how powerful and magical this poem is!

    To yearn for a person whom they have never met perhaps or to miss a loved one is the mood I felt within this elegant and graceful poem! Just lovely!

  • 1 year ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nice!!!

    • 1 year ago

      by Koan

      Thank you Brother, glad you enjoyed it!!!