Living to the fullest

by deeplydesturbed   Oct 10, 2016


Dead on the outside
slowly dying inside too
will I ever live?

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  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    As long as you want to pursue your dreams and you want to see the beauty of life. ..The hero within will live and it will shine outside. ..

    Goodluck nice poem

    Gel

  • 1 year ago

    by Marvellous

    Who finds Truth, certainly finds Life. Who believes finds Life possible.

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Naomi, a very dark senryu done very well. It's amazing how much can be said in so few words-well done-

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Naomi a great senryu though sad you say alot in few sentences amd many of us can relate.
    Life often throws sh it after sh it after sh it at people and you know why I think that because whoever is out there (I'm a non-believer) thinks we are the strongest so get it the worse.
    You may not feel like you're living now but once the darkness goes you cam start living again, I know ow difficult life can be but hold your,head up high and say "I am a survivor and I will not let this win.

    Em

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Thought provoking.

    Very good use of the Senryu form.

    Take care,

    Michael

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