Comments : Her Grace And The Orb

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello Ben,

    Your poems are improving at such a rate, that soon your work will require a pay per view status.

    The meter is superb and imagery amazing. A beautiful frosty morning in the woods, with a sun trying to breathe warmth upon the nature below. Finally, the balance between cold and warmth is reached.

    Wonderful work Ben. I am officially friend proud!

    Take care,

    Michael

    • 1 year ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Michael,

      Many thanks for your glowing praise but in terms of forms and imagery I have a long way to go to reach your dizzy heights.

      Take care,

      Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Sir Ben,

    I strongly agree with sir Michael this is a wonderful work.

    A piece made delicately by a clever mind....I like the way you play with words and it fits in every situation.

    Count me in I'm a proud friend too

    Gel

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Ben, Ben, Ben this was truly magical and when read aloud slid off the tongue.
    Elegant, smooth and wonderful imagery.

    I think Michael said it all.

    Em

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    I agree with everyone else on here Benny! I feel as though i should be paying.. such wonderful pieces you are coming out with! Well done

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Ben, this is just lovely. It flows so beautifully and the imagery-wow! Well done Ben, well done-

  • 1 year ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Ben, i have to say that this is and amazing write, i mean truly, your meter is perfect and the word choice is nothing short of genius, the journey from beginning to end is magical and I gotta say this is as near to a perfect write as I've seen in a long long time.

    Obviously nominated, 5/5 all day long..... Tinged with a little hint of jealousy.

    Good show ol'bean a wonderful piece.

    • 1 year ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Many thanks, Ben, but I have to admit to revelling in any jealousy you feel for this piece as I frequently feel the same when reading your work!

      Take care, old chap.

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Truly magical piece that transports us into a different dimension beautiful Milly x

  • 1 year ago

    by Shruti

    Wow! This is so beautiful and such an elegant write. The metaphors, your imagery all really beautiful.
    Your poems are a true pleasure to read!
    :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Trish

    Absolutely beautiful. It flows, and glides with a life of it's own.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Thanks, Trish

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations Ben! Another amazing write, well deserving front page win!

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Fabulous to see a fellow collaborator on the front page (again lol) well done

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats on the win benny! :)
    beautiful and well worth it! Now everyone on the site can see this lovely piece! :)

  • 11 months ago

    by hiraeth

    I'm glad this poem won, congrats!

  • 11 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I still can believe this poem.......it is SO good its ridiculous.

    Just saying....ok ....i'll go now...but I'll be back and you are forbidden to ever deleting this.

    • 11 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Lol, Ben. Okay, you have my word.

  • 11 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Good Show old bean :)

  • 11 months ago

    by Augustus Black

    Clearly deserves a win. This write is delivering great flow of imagination in the readers' minds. The description of the sun and its act is truly unique. I like the last four lines mainly as it is giving the great relaxation to the nature. One more time you have done quite brilliant job. I wonder what makes you create such beautiful and pleasing to the eye write. Congratulation, Sir.

    • 11 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you, Augustas. Take care.

  • 11 months ago

    by Augustus Black

    Clearly deserves a win. This write is delivering great flow of imagination in the readers' minds. The description of the sun and its act is truly unique. I like the last four lines mainly as it is giving the great relaxation to the nature. One more time you have done quite brilliant job. I wonder what makes you create such beautiful and pleasing to the eye write. Congratulation, Sir.

  • 11 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    Mystical nature at its true, breathtaking finest! This was elegant and a joy to read! well done Ben!

  • 6 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I freakin love this write. i know i've commented on this poem before but I think this is one of my favorite pieces of all time...from any writer published or not.

    • 6 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks, Ben - a whopping compliment!