Whispers (short song w/recording)

by Maher   Oct 11, 2016


There's a memory
(ooh)
so sweet to the tongue.
(aah)
It's plenty,
(ooh)
a trip in the wrong.
(aah)

When I feel her coming close;
"don't back down, there's much to do".
Please, break this silence,
it's enough that I want to;
I feel so warm, loving you.

It's amazing,
(ooh)
her breath in the night.
(aah)
I'm chasing
(ooh)
a rhythm in flight.
(aah)

A smile is all that can be heard;
"settle down, a job well done"
and yet, there's silence,
in the chamber of your gun;
I find it hard, loving you.

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You can listen to this song here:

https://youtu.be/vnDNF42cIYg

I'm no good with vocals, so I played it on guitar so you can get the jist of it. Please let me know what you think :)

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  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I like this, especially the gun metaphor. Risking love is like a games of Russian roulette.

    Take care,

    Michael

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you sir :)

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    You better lol =p and you know what i think of your voice..

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      We'll see :p

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Me and singing do not go well lol

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      I'd argue, but I say the same thing about myself haha

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    I can picture you singing this SC.. :)

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Lol thanks USB, maybe I'll record it some day :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    I sang this the way I thought it would be sung and its upbeat and uplifting..

    I have missed your work.

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Aw thanks Em :) Sorry I've been away.

      Definitely not upbeat though lol more eerie, but I'd love to hear an upbeat version if you'd show me :)

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