Comments : A Snowflake

  • 1 year ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Hellon,

    there is something kind of haunting about this write, I love its format and how it really accentuates the words and makes you absorb them. great word choices as always. melancholy but fantastic!

  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hello,

    Nice little piece. ..I like the layout. ....

    well done
    Gel

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    I love this piece. It's so sad but delicate

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A beautiful and delicate little write, Hellon. Nice to see you back.

    Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    So beautiful, the visuals are stunning.

  • 11 months ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Hi Hellon,

    This feels as a metaphor for the elusiveness of life. You can and need to take in as much of you can of all the beauty, love and happiness to be had, but you can never truly hold on to it, as nothing lasts forever.

    Well done!

    Ingrid