Comments : A one-sided argument (Collab with Maher)

  • 11 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hahahaha excellent funny Collaboration.

    this piece is a kind of relief ...done with my crying hahaha

    I can sleep now.
    zzzZzzzzzZZZzz

    Gel

    • 11 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Well, I'm glad it put you to sleep, Gel...

      No, many thanks, lol

  • 11 months ago

    by Em

    Absolutely loved this the first time and love it more since I read it again.
    Thanks for making me laugh guys.

    Em

    • 11 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks, Em, but as I pointed out in the club thread, but for Maher coercing me gently down the comedy route, it never would have come about. It is, as you know, not my natural style!

  • 11 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    I unique poem from a unique collaboration.

    Any poem with the words, 'bum' and 'boobs' is okay with me! lol

    Take care,

    Michael

    • 11 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Michael,

      You have me laughing...no mean feat on two hours sleep!

  • 11 months ago

    by Brenda

    You guys did an awesome write with this. It has everything, comedy, drama, suspense, death....entertaining all the way through. Well done you two!

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hahaha...oh my...hahaha...this is awesome Ben and Maher.

    • 2 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks, Mel. I remember this one was very fun to write, lol