Jack Frost is coming (haiku)

by Mr. Darcy   Oct 23, 2016


Jack Frost is coming (haiku)

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sunrise kisses gloss
gold leaves, soon to sleep beneath
his iced carpet

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michael
2016

Thanks Larry for your input.

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  • 7 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Judging Comment:

    This piece is really quite splendid. There is a great use of descriptive words, but without the expense of overdoing the syllable count. For being so short, as haiku are by nature, the author did an awesome job of balancing out just about every aspect of this. Very well written, I was fully entranced by the idea of the coming season.

  • 7 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    An autumnal warning of ice to come brrrrrhh. A beautiful little Haiku Milly x

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    How odd, Michael... :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Mayday

    Beautifully worded, my friend! I have been anticipating the arrival too! ^-^

    5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Beautiful holidays season is coming. ...How I wish I can touch or hold a snow. ..Nice Work sir Michael