Comments : Sky (acrostic)

  • 7 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello Em,

    A lovely little gem here. It makes you want to look up and wonder who will be waiting for our arrival...

    When the day eventually comes.

    Take care,

    Michael x

  • 7 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Loved this in the club thread, Em and I'm really glad you posted. You have it right on the mark with this one.

    All the best.

    • 7 months ago

      by Em

      Thanks guys. It also makes you wonder if you will get there one day

  • 7 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Brilliant job Em.. Fav piece

    Gel

    • 7 months ago

      by Em

      Thanks my friend

  • 7 months ago

    by Mayday

    Awwh *Hand-over-Heart* :') ...I can't even...

    this is beautiful <3

    5/5

    • 7 months ago

      by Em

      Thank you :)

  • 7 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    I love this.. Its not saying we wish the dead ones we love to come home but the other way around.. that heaven is our home.. Very well done.

    • 7 months ago

      by Em

      Thank you

  • 4 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Hi Em,

    I really like this one, I don't know why but it reminds me of a kind of medieval song or some thing you'd hear a took sing in LOTR lol

    Anyways, really nice write in so few lines :)

    • 4 months ago

      by Em

      Thank you Ben

  • 4 months ago

    by DirgeVenustas

    I really liked this poem, it was very short and very sweet. Straight to the punch. As I am sure it was meant to. This piece inspired the imagery of a nights sky, while all of the dead are watching over us waiting for us to return to the place before life began.. I really enjoyed reading this.

  • 3 months ago

    by Ren

    Beautiful, Em!