Comments : Dark Mistress (Parts I, II and III)

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Very nice Ben, what a twist at the end, lol. I was totally engrossed in this epic write-well done-

  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Astounding and astute written piece. ..

    I like the Ending. .. how clever. ..


  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Ben, this is truly epic. I will need to come back to this again and again before I can offer a comment that will do justice to such a piece.

    But for now, well done.


  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Very clever and fabulous Ben.

  • 1 year ago

    by DarkLight

    Powerful piece with enticing words and feel.


  • 1 year ago

    by Mayday

    I had actually read this days ago and I LOVED it, but, I knew I was going to love it from the title (lol) Mwaha
    Anyway, I interpreted this in a couple of ways but I got a little insecure- my apologies. I liked the spin you ended this with! Very dark and enticing as ADDICTIONS are. Whether it truly is being so caught up in carnal lust - or the bottom of a wine bottle- whatever it is, I think you really captured that sense of compulsion and desperation; The high that comes with fulfillment followed by the lows once you're forced to be without your poison, once again.

    Intense and troubling even! ^_^

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Ive read this before i believe. and it still has me wanting more! I just cant stop reading it! Well done

  • 10 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Ben .... you must be out of your effing mind.... this is AMAZING! I literally don't know what else to say. i'm sorry for shouting in your comments but......ahem.....SYRUP YOU NEED TO READ THIS!!!

    That is all.


    • 10 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      I probably agree to the out of my effing mind bit...

      Thanks Ben