Comments : A Verse Full Of Love (English sonnet)

  • 11 months ago

    by Brenda

    Oh Ben. Ben, Ben.....just lovely....sigh....

  • 11 months ago

    by Em

    Ben, you are most definitely the sonnet master. What a fabulous piece. I will not comment on the meter etc because I really haven't got a clue on it so will leave that to Michael lol but I will try my best to look at the content and give my view

    1: A great opening. If love is not felt then how are we meant to feel it from a wondrous love poem like this one because if love isn't shown then how else are we able to feel it?

    2: I am nodding here because love and the words I love you are (or can be) completely overused and said just because somebody says it to you so said out of respect but to show that love we have to follow then with actions not just say those words.

    3: I love this. I imagine blood dripping and writing instead of ink because you have probably been writing of your love for some time. Break the cage, get over those walls and love.

    Couplet: So beautiful.
    All the best
    Em

  • 11 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Simply a marvelous, well penned love sonnet.

  • 11 months ago

    by DarkLight

    Ben. Now this is a poem worth every twinkling star in the skies.

    Beautiful

  • 11 months ago

    by Mayday

    First off;

    "Sometimes, the act of love is far too trite,
    To quite convey the feelings that I own;"

    I think this is such a great line. You're trying so hard to convey things where their depth cannot TRULY be shown. I think that is so sweet and so frustrating and I completely understand! That is why poetry is ... amazing. I find it an extremely helpful way (sometimes the only way) to really explain what we otherwise would never be able to in normal conversations or little romantic favors- ALTHOUGH, the reader can definitely tell you still do try! -lol- ;)
    Cute and obviously very sincere.

    5/5

  • 11 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Sir Ben,

    This is impeccable. ...I can feel the love and sweetness from the start till the end. . sometimes we give it all and all we need or want is to hear and feel something in return that the love we gave and nurtured will be noticed or appreciates by our lovers.. .I will add this to my favourite coz this reminds me of what I said to Marvellous. ...That love needs to be nurture equally not by only one. ..

    Great write I liked it...

    Gel

  • 11 months ago

    by The Po whet

    Beautiful work Ben. Take care

  • 11 months ago

    by Mary

    Ben,
    It took me a minute to say what I wanted to without sounding weird, LOL. This is just so delicate and beautiful, and I'm afraid this is going to sound stupid, but sounds almost like something out of a Shakespeare play it is so lovely. Anyway, this was wonderful.

    • 11 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Mary - if only! The man is my hero, lol. Thanks again.

  • 11 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Benny,
    Can you do me a favour and just make me a book of your sonnets.. They are stunning! Shakespeare himself would be proud!

  • 11 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Congratulations! !!!!

  • 11 months ago

    by Em

    Congratulations Sir

  • 11 months ago

    by Lesney Jenn Sevilla

    Awe.. this is how i feel now :(

  • 11 months ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations on your win! Well deserving front page write-

  • 11 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Congratulations !!!! Ho Ho Ho!!

  • 11 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats on the win benny

  • 10 months ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Aww, this is a lovely sonnet full of love :)
    Love it!
    Have missed reading your sonnets :D

    • 10 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Olwin! Lovely to hear from you. I hope you are keeping well.

  • 10 months ago

    by Ren

    Beautiful!

    The kind of work that makes girls do that weird head tilt and sigh a bit and wonder why their hearts are feeling all mushy and stuff...

    Especially those last two lines!

    Wonderful to read, as always!

    Congratulations on the win! I hope you are doing well!

    • 10 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Ren, many thanks again. Likewise, I hope you're keeping well.

      Ben

  • 9 months ago

    by NightFlyer

    Beautiful poem, Ben. The love you express is pure and expressed very eloquently.

    • 9 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you so much for your time.

  • 4 months ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Delightful, melodic, amazing how you can make love pour from the quill in your quiver, just another masterpiece from Ben to deliver!

  • 4 months ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Delightful, melodic, amazing how you can make love pour from the quill in your quiver, just another masterpiece from Ben to deliver!

    • 4 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Very good, Ken.
      Take care, good man.