Comments : The Request to God

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    So sad but beautifully done. Hugs to you-

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Mahesh, this is a truly powerful and emotional piece that I guess people who have had bad life's will be able to relate to, calling on God to have mercy and bring you home. I must say I am not a believer but that this it home to me because many times I have begged for whoever is up there to release me from all the burdens etc but I am still here so I guess like you I am strong because I am told we're only dealt what we can handle.

    I must admit though the last stanza threw me off a little and I think the piece would be perfect without it though that is entirely your choice.

    All the best and remember its only a bad day, month or year not a bad life.
    Em

    • 4 months ago

      by Mahesh Kachare

      Yes. You are strong enough to be there to fight with bad circumstances. Thanks for the comment

  • 1 year ago

    by Denise Jefferson

    Really sad

    • 4 months ago

      by Mahesh Kachare

      Yes there are some people in the world like me who are so pessimistic.

  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    A sad piece.

    • 4 months ago

      by Mahesh Kachare

      Thank you so much for your reply or comment