Prisms (Acrostic + Rime Couee)

by stormingdance (Jessica)   Nov 13, 2016


Prisms heave upon broken shores
Ready to break open the doors
Inciting the siren
Shattering earthquakes with my roar
Making what is mine, also yours
Surviving - sovereign

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Rime Couee
Syllable ct: 8/8/6/8/8/6
Rhyme Scheme: aabaab

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  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Pure genius

  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Jessica ,

    this is a powerful write. ..

    Shattering earthquakes with my roar
    Making what is mine, also yours
    Surviving - sovereign

    Very well said

    Gel

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Jessica, another unique write from you-I love the forms you used and the story it tells-well done-

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Jess. What a lovely form of writing.. :) I may have to try this! Well done :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Very clever, Jessica, with a nice little slant rhyme between 'siren' and 'sovereign'. I really do love these mixed forms from you and the imagery you always seem to muster never ceases to surprise me.

    Well done. All the best,

    Ben

    • 1 year ago

      by stormingdance (Jessica)

      Thanks Ben! :) I am working on more. I may need suggestions for an Acrostic+Triolet form. Several of the lines repeat so I am trying to think of the perfect 8 letter word!

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