Comments : Father figure.

  • 11 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    All jokes aside, if a 27 year old will have me when I'm 65, my wife will simply have to accept the fact that she may be traded in. :)
    Em, in seriousness, this is an emotional piece of writing and deserves more than my childish jokes.

    Well done,

    Ben

    • 11 months ago

      by Em

      Thanks Ben your comment is truly appreciated even if its in jest lol

  • 11 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Excellent piece em. Age has no limits

    • 11 months ago

      by Em

      My thoughts exactly N but its destroyed now.

  • 11 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Sorry to hear em

  • 11 months ago

    by Brenda

    Em, such a sad write-reminds me of an old Eagles song- Lyin' Eyes. Same premise. You did a beautiful write with this, the pain shows through- hugs-

    • 11 months ago

      by Em

      Thank you Brenda,will have to listen to the song.

  • 11 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hi Em.

    I don't know why, but the curse took me by surprise. Lol

    A nicely told poem.

    Age is just a number, love us just a word.
    When one disses the other, that makes them a turd!

    • 11 months ago

      by Em

      Lol Michael you do make me laugh :) very true

  • 11 months ago

    by Everlasting

    I'm confused. XD

    He loved her, and she saw him as a father? Took advantage of him by lying that she loved him and now everything is worse for her?

    Or

    He loved her, and she loves him. But she is saying that he is her father in order to protect him because the age gap is way too much?

    Interesting story. Sorry if my interpretation makes no sense.

    • 11 months ago

      by Em

      Luce, basically he is a lot older thus being the 'father figure' and they are completely in love but she has been hurt before badly so had no trust etc and he was really supportive trying to get her trust but because she thought he would turn out like every other man she hurt him first knowing that he would leave.. True story lol