Comments : Ok despite black widow spider

  • 10 months ago

    by Brenda

    Loved this! Very creative write, engaging throughout the entire write. A well done tale of caution.

  • 10 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Very clever and funny story. I like how you've spun the story with a nice introduction, weaved in suspense, then although predictable a funny macabre ending. All this with rhyme too

    Well done,

    Michael

  • 10 months ago

    by Em

    Fantastic and original :)