Comments : Tuscany 1969 (fibonacci mirror)

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Michael, this is very serene and the imagery makes me want to be along the shoreline as the night falls and the water laps against my feet as the tide comes in though I'd best not stay long as I can't swim lol

    Beautiful, Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Excellent and a bit risque

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, very very nice and a whole lot of erotica in this write. Very clever play on words. This style is pretty cool. Well done-

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Nice layout it shape like a diamond or a shell ...The the layout fits the content..

    Well done Mr. Michael

    Gel

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    What a lovely layout Michael
    I must try this!!

    Well done Sir!

  • 7 years ago

    by ether

    Fibonacci is my homeboy and this was beautiful. a very interesting form you created here - was it your original idea or a preexisting form?

    Well done.

    • 7 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      I wish this had been my brainchild, but alas, the credit is not mine. Check the link for more information.

      I'm glad you liked my poem.

  • 7 years ago

    by Mary

    Lovely poem Michael

    • 7 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Thank you , Mary. I do rather like a nice image.

  • 7 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Awesome Awesome Awesome. Nominated. Poetry Freak.

  • 7 years ago

    by stormingdance (Lessa)

    Fabulous!

  • 7 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I am still reading this.....you are not normal.