Comments : Lump of Dust

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Another great write Marvelous. Well done

  • 1 year ago

    by sofia

    Great poem, with strong images and great musicality. And with just first the first verse you strucked my attention, wich is good.

  • 11 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    'The best we can is stay humble'

    A thoughtful line and insightful write in general, Marve. Some wonderful imagery and descriptive writing throughout.

    All the very best,

    Ben

  • 9 months ago

    by Ren

    "Whether soap, sweet perfume or cream
    We are simply buying some time
    In a while, again we decay
    We can only prepare our soul."
    ^^
    Love those last few lines! Especially the 'we can only prepare our soul'. This is so very true! Every day we age...no matter what...and it is not the outside looks that matter the most, but whats on the inside- such as your soul.

    This is a wonderful, insightful poem, full of imagery. Well done!

  • 9 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    M i am becoming an avid reader of your writing, you always have a very strong voice and I often find myself nodding as i'm reading, another great write from you here with an excellent wordchoice and general flow of the piece.

    Great job!

    Ben

  • 6 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    I actually think I think like a 50-year-old but my, I came upon this poem from someone a year younger talk about decaying into dust. I love how you penned this inspiring write. The message was true to the bones. A great write!