Comments : Fire; or flame?

  • 11 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    WOW!
    Okay.. well done.. I was nearly crying by the end of this.. Love Fizzling out like a flame on a candle at wicks end is a terrible feeling...

    Nominated. this deserves to be shared with everyone.

  • 11 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Wow ....this is an excellent piece..
    I like your choice of words. ..

    well done

    Gel

  • 11 months ago

    by Mary

    You are a talented writer. This is sad but you write beautifully. You somehow turn sad subjects into graceful and lovely pieces. A broken relationship is so very painful but we learn from those and then move on. I enjoyed reading this

    • 11 months ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      The most painful things teach the most valuable life lessons, indeed.
      Thank you.

  • 11 months ago

    by Brenda

    Wow! This was intense! I felt your pain in every stanza. I was nodding along as your write unfolded, so have been there. You really did an awesome job pouring this out. Well done-

  • 11 months ago

    by lilly

    Omg you just summed up my last relationship I exactly know how u feel But from experience now it does get better it's better to move on. You know at the time it was probably fire but it's strange how quickly it can go to flame no thought of our own we ain't to blame. But just learn from it and grow and one day you will see it just made you a stronger woman today. Brill poem I gave you a 5 x lilly

    • 11 months ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      Thank you so much.
      I'm glad you can relate to my writing;
      For it's usually the experiences we share with others that build the strongest bonds because we don't Feel like we are the only ones who have experienced the emotions those experiences brought.

  • 11 months ago

    by lilly

    Fault**

  • 11 months ago

    by Firenrain

    Beautiful poem . I loved it . You really write beautifully :)

  • 1 month ago

    by C J T

    You have a way with words. Beautifully written. The emotion goes to great depths. 5/5