Comments : She

  • 10 months ago

    by Brookie

    I very much enjoyed this poem. x3 Probably read it a little differently then most people but i did. :3

    • 10 months ago

      by Em

      Thanks Brookie. Really appreciate it :)

  • 10 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hi Em,

    I like what you have done here. It's like the ying yang of life. There maybe darkness, but there's light too. Best wear those sunglasses, the future looks bright to me.

    ((Hugs)) x

    • 10 months ago

      by Em

      Sunglasses on. Thanks Michael :)

  • 10 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi Email,

    I like the sound of reasoning here. ...

    She's unlovable
    but loving.
    She's resentful
    but forgiving.
    She's has an ugly face
    but a beautiful soul.
    She's so emotional
    but has great self control.
    She's overweight
    but needs to eat more.
    She may seem weak
    but is stronger than before.
    ^^^^

    you started every line negatively
    then turned it into positive. ...

    I liked it Em...catchy and many can relate to this....

    Gel

    • 10 months ago

      by Em

      Thank you very much Gel always appreciate your comments

  • 10 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Em this better not be about you. Your stunning and loveable! And everything else.

    • 10 months ago

      by Em

      Lol thanks. You know just one of those days,back on track now.

  • 10 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Em,

    There is certainly a sadness to this piece, but also a wonderful sense of self belief which is inspirational to read.

    Take care,

    Ben

  • 10 months ago

    by Mary

    Em, I love this. I love the comparisons you make here, the positives you find in the negatives. It's really quite beautiful. Very lovely piece.

    • 10 months ago

      by Em

      Thanks Ben and Mary. Appreciate it

  • 10 months ago

    by Brenda

    Em, such a sad write. I'm with N, you are beautiful inside and out! Hugs-Brenda

    • 10 months ago

      by Em

      Aww bless you Brenda.. Thank you hugs

  • 10 months ago

    by Everlasting

    Hmm you don't have an ugly face. At least I don't find it ugly based on your profile pic.

    I like the positivity and the negativity. It's good to be aware of both.

    • 10 months ago

      by Em

      Lol thanks Luce