A million

by Em   Dec 5, 2016


I could write a million letters,
they'd all begin and end with you.
I could write a million love songs,
each one about my heart so true.

I would write a million screenplays,
where our love for 'us' is shown.
I would say a million phrases
about you, the best love I've known.

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  • 1 year ago

    by Mary

    This is quite lovely Em.

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Thanks Mary

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Aw Em, such a sweet love poem. A million awwws for you!

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      And a million hugs for you :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Aw Em, I like this

    I could write a million letters,
    they'd all begin and end with you.
    I could write a million love songs,
    each one about my heart so true.

    ^^^
    aaahhhhh this is love Em and you want me to feel it again. ...

    I would write a million screenplays,
    where our love for 'us' is shown.
    I would say a million phrases
    about you, the best love I've known.

    ^^^^^
    this is impeccable Em

    I will include this piece on my favourite. ...
    well done
    Gel

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Aww thanks my dear, hope you're well.
      Take care

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Aww thanks my dear, hope you're well.
      Take care

  • 1 year ago

    by Everlasting

    I did not read the original version but I so like the final product. I like the melody and the emotion.

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Thanks luce, Michael is a gem to this site and always gives great suggestions.

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hi Em,

    Some little tweaks:

    I could write a million letters,
    they'd all begin and end with you.
    I could write a million (love) songs,
    each one about my (heart so) true.

    I (would) write a million screenplays,
    where our love for ('us') is shown.
    I (would) say a million phrases
    about you, the best (love) I've known.
    ^^
    Just a few tweaks to help it flow nicely.

    This poem was already good, I hope the tweaks make it really good.

    Take care,

    Michael xx

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Thank you Michael as always for your wonderful comment and support in helping me grow within myself and my poetry and your great edit suggestions. I like what you did.