Comments : Christmas (acrostic)

  • 11 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Excellent em

    • 11 months ago

      by Em

      Inspired by you so thank you :)

  • 11 months ago

    by Jamie

    The first thing i noticed about the poem was the title. I noticed the you used Christmas as the poem itself but "really" was in the title.

    We in first world countries don't understand what we have is enough but we always want more. I think this poem speaks volumes about people who don't have anything not even what they need. It sucks. We take for granted the food we eat, the things we buy. I always think of Christmas for the time for giving and not buying loads of stuff. You paint your message well.

    The poem itself was excellent and it flows well to me. Is it really Christmas if we don't think of others? X

    • 11 months ago

      by Em

      Thanks Jamie, I wrote really in the title as I thought I'd written one titled Christmas before but I know it's off putting.
      We do all take things for granted, too much sometimes. Christmas is definitely for giving.

  • 11 months ago

    by Brenda

    Excellent acrostic Em. Lots of food for thought.

    • 11 months ago

      by Em

      Thanks Brenda. <3

  • 11 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Em, it makes for a revealing read. We in England, like to think the royal family are in touch with the real world, but this write, makes us think...

    Maybe not?

    Well done, another poem that evokes an emotional reaction.

    Take care,

    Michael x

    • 11 months ago

      by Em

      Thanks as always Mr D. Your comments truly mean more than you think :)

  • 11 months ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    A very powerful sentiment delivered well

    • 11 months ago

      by Em

      Thanks michael