Comments : Listen to me darling...

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Meika - a very warm welcome to the sight.

    This is a very sad first post from you but there will be a fair few people on this site who will relate and understand your position.

    I suppose we all wear masks to some degree, but obviously, some hide much greater pain than others.

    Well written with some fluent rhyming.

    All the very best,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Meika, welcome to the site and well done on a sombre write. I guess as Ben says many people on this site will be able to relate to this somewhat and I am one of those people unfortunately.

    Some great rhyming throughout. I feel that we should all be ourselves if we can be and not take on someone else's persona as nobody truly knows what someone else has been through but I think the final statement of someone hurting you because they're perfect is somewhat untrue because even though we may feel someone is perfect no one truly is.

    Kudos on a good write.
    Em