Comments : Maybe, someday

  • 10 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Em, can I vote a '10' for this?

    Excellent!! X

    • 10 months ago

      by Em

      Thanks foe your help again :)

  • 10 months ago

    by hiraeth

    I really like this - a truly warming write. Well done.

  • 10 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    As everyone is aware I do love a bit of love poetry and I really love this write Em, especially the tempo, this is the type of write that needs to be read slowly and absorbed and the word choice and punctuation controls the reader to do just that. great job and nominated.

    Ben

  • 10 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    3rd line of last stanza might flow better like this:

    Burning for you, still brightly

    • 10 months ago

      by Em

      Thanks Mark and Ben really appreciated. and Mr D, thanks again, will edit :)