Comments : An Orange Man

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Luce,

    It's good to know you were crazy back in 2013!

    I think you left the word 'be' out of this line:

    that I used to rolled on my tummy to exercise,

    also, unless a play on words, cirgury is a typo.

    I like this a lot, Nominated!

    Take care,

    Michael

    • 7 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you Mr Darcy,

      But what are you talking about? Lol
      I was way too sane back in 2013...

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This is fantastic.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lucero,

    There is rarely anything 'sane' about your writing- it is always weird and wonderful.

    All the best

    • 7 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you for the compliment. :]

  • 7 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Lucero the creator!!!!!! Great one .