Senseless Killings Of War

by Ben Pickard   Dec 30, 2016


Your ears were muffled
with gun powder. My eyes
were shredded with shrapnel -

- you saw them shoot her
in silence while I could only
hear our little girl's screams.

--

Ben Pickard 2016

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  • 9 months ago

    by Kasie

    Ben,

    You were able to convey strong emotion of sadness and fear with few words. While reading, I could feel the guy wrenching fear and guilt of not being able to help from being wounded. I love free form poetry, it usually has the most emotion.

    Great job on this piece.

  • 9 months ago

    by Augustus Black

    Scary write. Very scary indeed with the sense of sadness too. This kinds of horrible stuffs often happens in our evil world, but these people don't know that their names has been registered in the Hell.

    A very sad imaginary. Sir... All the best for the future. And Happy New Year 2017.

    • 9 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      I agree completely, Augustus.

      Many thanks for your time and a happy new year to you too.

  • 9 months ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Hmm
    nice interesting poem.
    sharp.........

  • 9 months ago

    by anand singh

    Quite vivid imagery of Human suffering. And all for what? Good job on this piece Ben.

    • 9 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Anand - thank you very much for your time.

  • 9 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Wow.. how... depressing =/ im suddenly sober.. this reminds me of a time our world is in war.. here i am celebrating and a city has just been bombed..

    If i could nominate i would

    • 9 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Sorry, Naomi. I suppose that's what I was thinking about as I wrote this: there's a lot of celebration going on at the moment around the world but an awful lot of suffering too.

      Take care