Wow! I think this is very sweet and gentle write. You have done this very astoundingly, I feel the great rhythm of love in every lines. The season of autumn is truly unique, it bring loving people together again. I like they way you have constructed your fall with the falling of leaves.
I feel the hope of love that it will come again in the season of autumn from the west to take you all the way to his kingdom. How beautiful this write. All the best.