Comments : Old Cemetary Road

  • 1 month ago

    by Kasie

    Beautifully written, I love the wording and structure of the poem. Well done.

  • 1 month ago

    by Em

    Andrea, I loved this for the club challenge and it seems more beautiful now.

    Take care

  • 1 month ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Andrea, this, even without the footnote is sad; however, with it, the poem is heart-breaking. I confess, until now I hadn't read it properly, but boy I am glad I did.

    The thought that 'Mother moon' aka 'Luna' know and sees all is powerful. BTW my son is called Lucas - meaning, giver of light.

    Mother moon witnessed your shared confession, she also knew of the sickness and misery to come. She did not warn, no, for she knew you needed one another, you 'an anorexic love child' and he with an awful fever. Both 'broken birds', but how I like to see it, is two halves making a whole.

    The tombstone inscription a foretelling etched in stone - a promise of an eternity together, come what may.

    ((hugs)) for you both xx

  • 1 month ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, I loved this in our club challenge and I love it even more now. Such a dark write with a lot of love there. We sometimes come into another's life at the strangest times or places. I truly believe you two came together at the exact right time as you so eloquently wrote-well done-

  • 1 month ago

    by ddavidd

    Congratulation dear Maple.

    • 1 month ago

      by Maple Tree

      Thank you Mr Swan, hugs you

  • 1 month ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    A stunning piece Andrea..

  • 1 month ago

    by Em

    Congratulations <3

  • 1 month ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats on the win with this Andrea. I loved it in the group comp and you won, and now it won on the home page!

  • 1 month ago

    by Dottie Donathan

    I live on Preston Cemetary Road. Lol