Comments : A military burial

  • 9 months ago

    by Kasie

    Beautifully written, it have gave me chills. It sends a strong message that vets deserve respect whether they are family or not. Well done

    • 9 months ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Kasie, they truly do.

  • 9 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Bravo on this Brenda. As if I can witness the scene. .you are very good on visuals. ..
    Sad tale but very well done

    Gel

  • 9 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Brenda.. wow.. speechless.. well done.

  • 9 months ago

    by Em

    Brenda, there are no words for this apart from sad but beautifully written.

    Em

  • 9 months ago

    by Brenda

    Thank you ladies. I can see this scene like it was yesterday.

  • 9 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    This had my vote. There is so much here and all of the imagery is crystal clear. When poetry is this vivid it stirs emotional streams until they bubble and overflow their resisting banks.

    • 9 months ago

      by Brenda

      Awww, thanks Michael. I appreciate your wonderful comments.

  • 9 months ago

    by Theoretical Thespian

    There are no words for how sad and beautiful this poem is.

    Kudos.

    ~ Renegade

    • 9 months ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much-that means a lot.

  • 9 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Brenda, i loved this in the challenge and i love it now too :)
    well done.

    • 9 months ago

      by Brenda

      Thanks N, I appreciate you...

  • 9 months ago

    by Ezeani Sunday

    Wao!!! I felt challenged to die for my country. However, I am not a soldier. What can I do?

    • 9 months ago

      by Brenda

      Just thank a veteran for serving, support our troops. That's the best thing we can do for our soldiers. Thank you!