Better Half (syntuit)

by Larry Chamberlin   Jan 6, 2017


Much was important
things I could not do without
until there was you.

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  • 8 months ago

    by Phil

    Very true, we will all eventually have that one person we couldn't live without then we will wonder how we survived many years without them.

  • 9 months ago

    by Theoretical Thespian

    That's so sweet. This is a beautiful piece, and with all the lines and syllables this form permitted you to have, a lot went into this.

    Kudos.

  • 9 months ago

    by Brenda

    Larry, so sweet. I know myself could not exist without my other half.

  • 9 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Larry,

    I think Em has pretty much covered it with her comment, so I will only add that I feel the same about my 'better half'.

    Well done and all the best,

    Ben

  • 9 months ago

    by Em

    Larry, this is a beautiful piece and though the form only allows so many lines and syllables you did it delicately and alot went into this.

    Better half - I guess we all think this when we meet the 'one' that they are our better halves.

    In life, we all have things of importance and things we feel we cannot live without and then bam that special someone comes along and the things we thought were important and that we couldn't live without seem to be put into perspective as we don't know how we ever thought they were important especially because of that person and how important they are and how we cannot live without them. I know I'm rambling but I hope you I make sense.

    Beautiful, Em

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