Comments : Attitude (a senryu)

  • 9 months ago

    by Brenda

    Nice little senryu here-I liked it a lot. You might want to change to title though. I was told by a very informed writer that in a senryu the title doesn't give it away, your last line does. Just a thought-

    • 8 months ago

      by Phil

      I do like this though I have read that somewhere too. How about characteristics? Just a though.