Comments : Flight of a Bee (a haiku)

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Nice haiku! Love your story, well done-

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    I like this little haiku! Well done :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Phil

    We can aspire to be that bee.. Floy and never look back.

  • 1 year ago

    by BlueJay

    I can't help but wonder was this meant to help you through a part of your life, or someone through their own hard time?

    Because this is interestingly penned and feels slightly overdone, but original in format if that makes sense.

    Anyway, either way nicely done.