Part my hair

This is far different from what we usually see in romantic poems. Yes, that definition is quite unique in its ways. I like this.

A very delightful write. Heart winning performance. I like how you bring up marvelous new theories of love.

Amazing to read.

Gel,

firstly, I love how you've decorated this poem. It looks like its been sprinkled with fairy dust, which is just what you intended, so well done! :O)

As Augustus states, you do 'bring up marvelous new theories of love.'

Parting of hair brought to me a guy running his fingers through your heir and allowing it to slip slowly through it as he moves in for a kiss.

I can almost hear the beats and the anticipation of you - waiting for those words...

Well done, Gel.

This was a wonderful read. I loved the decoration and the layout. It's absolutely beautiful. Well done

Also, in the first line is (see) intended to be spelled that way or did you mean to spell it (sea)?

Once again well done.

Gel,

As Michael says, the layout of this poem is a joy to behold and the content is as lovely to read.

Well done and all the best,

Ben

Gel, yet another beautifully decorated and sentimented piece.

1/ Beautiful opening.

2/ Just imagine if you could see your love every night in the stars. What a lovely image. Found I think should be find.

3/ So sweet. And very vivid imagery that every girl wants...

4/ Nothing beats feeling and hearing a mans heartbeat when they are near, a fast beat foe love right lol

5/ Loved this.. If only wishes and fairy dust was real we would all be happy, have our bellies filled and our thirst quenched... Doe I think would read better as does.
How you don't mind suggestions, its perfect none the less.

The decoration does look a little like fairy dust.

Take care,
Em