Overrated

by Kasie   Jan 23, 2017


Dreams are overrated,
Always crashing down.
Nothing but ill fated,
Hopes are doomed to drown.

Always out of range,
Too sly to even touch.
Willing it to change,
But it's all just too much.

So here I will sit,
until the end of time.
I give up.... I quit,
The dreams were never mine.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Kasie, another sad yet realistic piece by you that many people can relate too.

    1/ yes, they are and sometimes its hard to separate nightmares to reality because they seem the same. We can dream but sometimes we have to realise some dreams can be unreachable but only if you give up, so all we need to do it try and try.

    2/ Dreams are only out of reach if you let them be. Try to set reachable goals and then once they have been reached then set more and remember you can do it and are strong.

    3/ No, no, no!!! Do not give up lady. I will say it again, you are strong and can do this!!!

    Em

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you for your thoughtful comment.

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Kasie, never give up! Some days it's the only thing we have to hold on to. Dreams are what we get up for in the morning, propelling us into this world. Dreams are what gives us our wings and a chance to grow. Your dreams will be realized, it happens when you least expect it. Hang in there-

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you for your thoughtful comment.

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Kasie,
    We all have a moment in time where we give up on our dream.. and it turns out we later regret it.. so dont give up :) hang in there! if you ever need to chat or vent, just inbox, its always open!

    Well done on this piece.. :)

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you so much for your support.

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