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by - Mr. Darcy
Em, your rhyme is effortless - I find this difficult to do sometimes. I think thats why I choose free form so often.
Nice compact stanzas which are easy to read. Well done. x
"This heavy heart
loving again, how?
It's wavered so long
so I ask why now?"
Those first few lines reeled me in and then I get to this bit and it hit quite close to home. I had to pause and re-read them several times-with chills and goose-bumps, might I add.
Your rhyme is fluent and your word choice excellent! Very much enjoyed reading this beautiful piece, Em :)
Love this Em. Beautifully written, who is this mystery man?