Comments : certitude

  • 10 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Em, your rhyme is effortless - I find this difficult to do sometimes. I think thats why I choose free form so often.

    Nice compact stanzas which are easy to read. Well done. x

    • 10 months ago

      by Em

      Thanks all

  • 10 months ago

    by Ren

    "This heavy heart
    loving again, how?
    It's wavered so long
    so I ask why now?"

    Those first few lines reeled me in and then I get to this bit and it hit quite close to home. I had to pause and re-read them several times-with chills and goose-bumps, might I add.

    Your rhyme is fluent and your word choice excellent! Very much enjoyed reading this beautiful piece, Em :)

    Take care!

  • 10 months ago

    by Brenda

    Love this Em. Beautifully written, who is this mystery man?