I liked this poem, because it is was dealt with the heartbreaking theme in a simple way, which made it quite hard-hitting and visual. It was very easy to feel the emotion in the poem. I like the repitition, it is almost like a second voice permeating throughout the poem. Keep it up.

Very emotional

:'(

Kyle, you have written such a loving poem here that it even brought a tear to my eye just reading it!
This is a wonderful, but sad and sensitive write, full of love, caring and compassion and I appreciated every line of it.
You have a real talent for putting emotion into words.