Comments : Rainbow in the Clouds

  • 7 years ago

    by Alex Penuelas

    I would like to comment that I'm fully aware that this isn't a poem per se, but rather a story I could not get across though any other means other than prose. I have here a link to the image of me with the lady whom I helped:
    https://m.facebook.com/story.php?story_fbid=1347085548696838&id=100001862166252

  • 7 years ago

    by BlueJay

    The introductory stanza reminds me of a piece I wrote like 4 years ago. If I can dig it up I'll send it your way.

    I like the way this tells a story and documents a moment in your life as well. I hope that you continue bringing kindness and sunshine to other people's lives. Prose worked well for this, but honestly I feel like your word choice could have been a little more potent.