Comments : The Bird

  • 1 month ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Welcome to the site, Trudy.

    A sad poem indeed but one tinged with a little hope, perhaps. "Would the bird fly..." - let's hope so.

    Take care and keep writing,

    Ben

    • 1 month ago

      by trudy

      Thank you Ben :) Keep writing xx

  • 1 month ago

    by Brenda

    Trudy, welcome! A sad write with a lot of hope. I too hope the bird takes flight and both of you heal. I noticed a typo, will only has one l. Also didn't know if you meant "dig" vs dug at the end?. Well done-

    • 1 month ago

      by trudy

      Hey Brenda, Thank you so much. You're really warmth-full.
      I meant dug, Im from holland so sometimes I mix it up. Thank you. I think I like both dug and dig.
      Thanks xx